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Old 4th March 2006, 11:28 AM
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This story's title is: It started with a vial.

Note: This story is not one of those 'OMG HE GAINED SO MUCH WEIGHT HE BALLOONED TO 500 POUNDS IN JUST 10 MINUTES!' or anything like that.

Also: This story takes place in my favorite vacation spot, Rehobeth Beach, Delaware! (They have candy shops there, so that's why.)

Here's the First Chapter. It took me from 2:00 PM yesterday 'til now to finish.

This story takes place in Delaware, my favorite vacation spot!

Chapter One: The Beginning

Ben woke up after a second night of pizza and beer. At the age of 22 and weighed at a mere 171 pounds. See, Ben had always dreamed of being a big guy. And when I mean big guy, I mean fat guy, not massive muscle guy. Although he was always athletic, he had always been attracted to big men since he was 10. He had found lots of gainer sites, which he had stumbled upon while he was searching for links to download the latest episode of Outlaw Star (when Ben was 10 years old, the year was 2006). He had accidentally stumbled upon a gainer site, and...well, it fell into place like a jigsaw puzzle. He made accounts like '1o7d4V' so that no one knew who he was or how old he was. He always looked at the pics with a fire in his eyes that said 'I want to be this guy'. Of course it seemed only to be in his dreams.

Anyway, he had also dreamed of being a video game programmer. He had a hand in making games for the latest game consoles. He had a Masters and a Bachlors degree in Artistry, and also learned how to make 3-D replica's of his drawings. He had made some friends in college. One of them, named Phil Hrez, was studying to be a scientist. They had lost contact with each other until Ben's 21st birthday. Ben was in the grocery story when he saw Phil. They both exchanged hellos and, after they had all their groceries, exchanged phone numbers so that they could keep in touch.

Less than a week before the start of our story, Phil had called to tell Ben that he had invented a new serum. It was to help athletes burn off fat legally (it wasn't a stimulant, just sorta like one of those weight loss pills, only liquified). Anyway, Ben was told to gain weight until he got to 170 pounds. Ben merely said ok, as he had weighed 168 pounds. He ate nothing but junk food, but excercised at least 20 minutes a day. He reached 171 the day before he was supposed to go to Phil's lab, and got dressed for the big meeting.

After about 15 minutes of driving, Ben finally reached Phil's House. It looked like your standard home on the outside, but when Ben entered Phil's abode, he was amazed. Lots of tubes of all shapes and sizes were all over Phil's whole home. There was no place that at least a test tube or a beaker wasn't there. Ben knocked on the open door to make him noticed by Phil, who was watching lab rat run in circles.

Phil looked up from the rat cage and exclaimed, "Ben, you're finally here!" Phil smiled and said, "Before you come in, please take your shoes off and wear those slippers please? I've made them myself. They're supposed to prevent liquid chemicals from touching your feet." Ben did so. Phil smiled again and said, "Follow me." Phil escorted Ben to an empty room, with a table, two chairs, and a vial of teal liquid. Ben sat down at one chair while Phil sat on the other. The whole room fell silent for ten seconds until Phil spoke out. "So, I hope you remember what I told you over the phone, do you?" Phil asked. Ben replied, "Yes, I remember all the details."

Phil said, "Well, let me tell you what this," pointing to the vial, "is anyway." He took the vial out of the holder and held it up into the lamplight. He said, "This is my new drug I have invented. It's scientific name is ZYDG1953. I call it the 'Booster'." Ben started to talk, but just just fell silent. Phil said, "I have tested this drug on lab rats who were overweight. They had lost almost 12 pounds since two weeks ago." I didn't call you until about a week ago, so I had a week's worth of testing to do. It was successful on lab rats, so I need a human test subject to try this out."

Ben looked nervously at the vial and said, "I want to be paid for this. How much are we talking?" Phil looked at him and said, "Oh, about 20-25 grand. I make money more than I can spend it, so I'm willing to part that much." Ben stared at him and said, "You sure?" Phil nodded his head yes. Ben said, "Ok, I'll accept. When will I drink the vial?" Phil chuckled a bit and said, "Why, right now of course!" Ben went to grab the vial, but pulled his hand away and said, "This won't kill me, will it?" Phil started laughing and said, "Oh Heavens, No! I tested all of the same combonations of this vial's contents on all of my overweight lab rats, and not a single one died."

Ben, with his hands shaking, took the vial and gulped the contents in one gulp. There was silence for ten minutes before Phil said, "There, now it should kick in when you get back home. The contents of the vial take the food that you eat and burn off any food that is still inside of you when you go to sleep. Test it for me please when you do another of your nightly binges you've told me you've had this past week, please. Then call me about four days from now and tell me if anything has happened." Ben nodded yes and left to go home.
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Old 4th March 2006, 01:41 PM
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Good beginning, but at some points it isn't in Chronologicall order.
Would love to read more tho.
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Old 4th March 2006, 02:12 PM
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I did found out some pictures at Gainerweb.com looks like the stuff you describe here.
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Old 4th March 2006, 03:31 PM
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You mean drawings or life pictures?
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Old 4th March 2006, 03:35 PM
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The drawings on there, i bet you got inspired by those...
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Old 4th March 2006, 07:08 PM
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Hm... I bet I know what that drug will do
Great story btw!
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Old 5th March 2006, 01:14 AM
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Oh, just to let everyone know,
Beer will not be a contributing factor.

Chapter Two is finished, I just have to manually correct any spelling mistakes and all that other stuff.
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Old 5th March 2006, 02:03 AM
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Here it is!

The second chapter in 'It Started with a vial...'

Please read thoroughly otherwise you'll miss something. (If I am inaccurate about some things detailing Ben's gain, then don't worry, I'll correct them in a new post [because I can't edit after 30 min])


Chapter Two: The Effects

Ben had been home for three days now. His curiousity grew with each day. He could almost swear that he was actually gaining instead of losing weight. He was at 171 when he went to Phil's Lab, but when he got on the scale he had in the bathroom, the numbers reached 175.2 pounds. Ben had been exercising and eating healthy foods like fruits and vegetables, meat and grains, and only had a candy bar as desert only once.

Ben held off on calling Phil cause gaining about 4.2 pounds in just three days, while slightly absurd, didn't sound serious. He thought maybe to cut back on exercising for three-fourths of each day. That way he would see if it wasn't the exercise that was making him see absurd things. Boy, was he wrong...

Four days later...
Ben got up out of bed to find he had massive moobs and a huge jiggling gut! Actually, I'm just pulling your leg. This is what really happened.

Four days later...
Ben got up from bed and stood up. He noticed he felt bloated a bit. He guessed the carbonation from that root beer didn't wear off from last night. He had nothing but a tank top shirt on and was wearing speedos. He walked to the bathroom and turned the light on. He stood in shock at what he saw in his mirror. The first thing he saw in his reflection was that he had a very very small double chin, and that there was a slight bulge in his tank top. He then took his tank top off to see if anything else was different about him. He looked at his gut in horror to find that his gut jutted out barely a half an inch from his speedos. His thighs were a bit bigger than a week ago, and his speedos started to feel tight. Ben hopped on the scale to see his weight. It read 184.1 pounds. Ben started to think, 'This is absurd! No one can gain this much weight in a week! It's physically impossible! I bet that vial is to blame!' Ben made a call to Phil's home. Phil's answering machine picked up. Ben left a message saying for Phil to call him immediately.

Ben put the phone back on his phone's charging station and heard a wierd noise. He looked around for about a few seconds before realising it was his stomach that was making the noise. He looked at his gut in horror as it grew 3 centimeters bigger (Ben has a really keen eye, so that's why he could tell). He felt his speedos get a very tiny bit tighter and felt hungry. He went into the kitchen to see what there was to eat. he opened all the pantry doors and looked in the refridgerator. Nothing there. He decided to go out to eat. He put on some clothes that still fit and got into his car. He turned toward a nearby restaraunt called "The Blue Plate". He stood at the entrance and waited until he was seated. He felt very hungry, so when the waitress came to take his order, he ordered a plate of scrambled eggs (which take up the entire plate, believe me!), a stack of pancakes, some coffee, and soft shell crab sandwich (Ben looked at his watch and the time was 11:45 A.M.). He recieved his meal in twenty minutes time and he started on the eggs. He put some salt on the eggs, and after he finished them (which took about eight minutes), he started on the pancakes. he put syrup in between each pancake and then poured some more on top of them. He finished them off in six minutes. He then started proceeded on the SSCS (Soft Shell Crab Sandwich), but then felt the same feeling when he was in his bathroom. He walked to the bathroom and looked at his gut (he had locked the door behind him and then took his shirts off). His gut was 4 centimeters bigger, his chest only 2 cm. His thighs made his speedos incredibly uncomfortable and he had a minor headache. After he put his shirts back on and pretended to use the restroom, he sat back at his table. The waitress came just in time. She asked if he would like the bill and he said yes. He also asked for some tuppaware for his Sandwich (he would eat it later). The bill was about $12.48, so Ben paid it with cash and walked to his car. He drove home and checked his answering machine. There was a message from Phil. Ben let it play for him. Here's what it said:

"Ben, I've just discovered that any food that you consume, you will gain one third of the calories you've eaten for that meal! Please try to refrain from eating for about a day. I will have an antidote by then, but please don't eat anything!"

Ben just muttled through those few sentences. He thought about the predicament he was in for thirty minutes. Half of him wanted to get rid of whatever was causing him to gain, but the other half said to keep it. He was confused. He didn't know what to go with. He was so confused, that when he went for work the following afternoon, he was sent home because of drawing very deformed characters for his job's next video game.

The next morning, Ben woke up and noticed that the same speedos he wore yesterday morning felt like they were going to break off of his body. His tank top also felt a little bit heavy. Ben walked to his bathroom, half awake-half asleep, and did his neccessary tasks. It took him a minute to figure out why he felt like his underwear had shrunk. He noticed a bulge that was even more noticible by common folk. His belly streched out about two inches, his thighs were making his speedos very, very uncomfortable, and there was a new addition to his body. His pecs, which used to be slighly defined, now bulged a slight bit into his tank top shirt. his tank top, which was a size medium, now felt like a small size. He was about to hop onto his scale when Ben felt pain in his stomach.

Ben grabbed his stomach like he was hugging himself and fell to the floor. He felt his belly, thighs, chest, and arms get bigger, then before he opened his eyes, his body went back to what is was before the pain. But Ben noticed that his belly was bigger, his thighs were bigger, his tank and speedos were smaller (his tank was riding up his belly by 1.5 centimeters). He walked onto the scale and saw his weight climb over 185. The digital meter stopped at 191.0, and Ben felt something in him. He didn't know wether it was fear or pleasure, but it made him feel happy. He smiled, then heard the phone ring. Ben picked it up and said, "Hello? Ben's residence! May I ask who's calling please?"

Phil spoke and said, "Oh, thank goodness Ben! I've been trying to get a hold of you for hours. Good thing you've woken up. I have some good news and bad news." Ben said, "Tell me the good news first, please." Phil replied, "Ok. Good news is that I have the antidote made and it's ready right now. The bad news is any weight you have gained will stay on your body until you work it off, which will take twice as much time at a gym." Ben told Phil, "Yeah, about that. See, I like the stuff you gave me in that vial. I don't know how to tell you this, but I've always wanted to be fat, y'know? I mean, it was my dream!" Ben then stood in his house, feeling embarrassed and horrified that he had said that, wearing nothing but a small tank top and speedos, holding the phone to his ear. There was no noise over the phone for about a minute until Phil said, "You sure? I could still give you the antidote, but if you don't take it before you reach a weight of 658 pounds, you will never be able to be normal again, ok?" Ben said, "Yeah, I understand." Ben remembered something that Phil had said, then spoke, "Hey Phil, you still owe me that 20-25 grand you promised when I started this thing." Phil fell silent for a moment, then said, "Oh yeah, I forgot. The money is in the mail. You'll get it in cash, so spend it wisely, ok?" Ben had thought of plans for the cash, said, "Ok, Phil, I will.", and hanged up.
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Kinda sounds like you ran it through Babelfish...remember, the thing our stories are trying not to be is the infamous 'THE BEST STORY!!!'
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Kinda sounds like you ran it through Babelfish...remember, the thing our stories are trying not to be is the infamous 'THE BEST STORY!!!'
Stop brining it up but you are right, we don't need that ever again
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