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Old 13th July 2008, 12:19 PM
bellyisma bellyisma is offline
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I like the idea of the story very much. If I may comment: Try to describe with more details and really personally, the story has a very good potential. and dont write to quick, It is not bad to write a few scenes in a summary before you write them detailed. Nice greets , hopefully we read more from you soon!
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