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pebbles
24th May 2006, 08:19 PM
once apon a time ther was a kid names Juan Martinez. Juan came from a large mexican family with many cousins and relatives that stayed around the house. Juan wasnt the most popular kid so he stayed home alot and watched tv and played video games. His mother was one of those hispanncic moms that stay home and have notheing better to to than feed there family members. because of this jaun turned out to be a little chubby. by the time he was 11 years old he was 110 lbs. Because of his chubbiness he was teased and made fun of him so he would go home and eat. by 14, juan weighed 150. he had a little gut that suck out and no visible muscle. Because Juan was being teased so much, his mother decided to homeschool him. there was one problem with this, jauns mother had only up to an 8th grade education and juan was in eight grade going into ninth so he had just about as good education as his mother. never the less jaun did not show up at school in august for highschool. he stayed home with his mother and cousins with on and off jobs. Juans mother used to wait till her husband got home and there big family got home to feed the family, but since juan would be home all the time she could cook for him.
Juan loved food. He would eat until he had to start homework of go to bed. He would eat everything put in front of him. Juan would lie down on the family's large couch and be served courses of food by his mother. Very large plates of rice, pork, chicken, turckey, mashed patatoes, eggs, tamales, burritos, and other spanish food. When his mother was out or grocery shopping, juan would order pizza or chinese or most of the time, both. Juan would eat and eat and eat and eat way after he was full. It hurt to keep filling his already stuffed belly but it would continue to expand. Juan started to notice his body changing. he started growing rolls of fat above his belly which he noticed was getting very large. he noticed that his belly was now touching his fat thighs when he sat. It hung over his pants even when he stood up and he was starting to get manboobs. 6 months had past since the end of 8th grade and it was now january. By now juan had grown alot. his belly was now huge but it didnt stick out very much because it was almost ALL fat. It was extrmemly jiggy because of the lack of muscle. His rolls were now the size of pool noodles on the bottom and the size of bike tires as they went up. His manboobs had become about the size of a girls B cup bra but were more saggay and connected to a roll of fat that went to his back. His thighs became very squishy and hurt constanly from holding the great weight of his food filled belly.He had a fat blown up face and an almost non existant neck. evry time he moved he jiggled because he had almost no muscle. He rarely moved at all. When he was lying down his cousins who were strong from construction work lifted him to go to the bathroom. He like being lifted because he didnt have to put and effort into it. It took abot four of his cousing to pic him up and carry him to another chair to be fed more. None of his clothes really fit him so he wore sweatshorts and he never wore a shirt. anothe 2 months had gone by and it was time for Juan to get a check up at the doctors. He had a check up last year in 8th grade. On the day of the appointment Juan put on some sweatshorts and attempted to put on one of his shirts. None of them would button and none of his tee shirts could get past the secong roll of fat. His mother said " at least ur eating and growing strong." His mother didnt know the meaning of strong and being fat. Juans mother got Juan one of his very large (as in muscular) cousin's plain white tank tops. It fit him tight, and a manboob would occasionally pop out one of the sides. U cluold see hi plump figure because it was so tight and his belly hung out the bottom. Juan Waddled to the car and they had to sto at McDonalds on the way to the doctors office. They got to the Doctors office and the nurse took Juan to a scale and the reading said 230 lbs. Juan was surprised but didnt really care about that a whole bunch. The doctor came in and look astonished at the sight of someone so big and so young but he went about his buissness. He told Juan to take off his shirt to check his heartbeat. The doctor put the stethescope up to a roll of fat and couldt hear anthing through the thick fortress of fat. He called the nurse back in to have her hold up layers of fat so he could listen. SHe had to hold one of his manboobs with two hands so the docter could listen. After that the doctor took a look at the clipboard. You saw a look of amazment on his face. HE said. "Last time you were her you weighed 155 lbs and now you weigh 240!" he said in amazment. " that means u gained 85 lbs in 8 months!" Juan didnt know what to say to this. The doctor told Juan and his mother that Juan was Morbidly obese and he needed to change his eating and excercise habbits. The doctor also fould out that Juan was at risk for a skin diseased caused from lack of sunlight. So when Juan got home his mother said that he had to eat for at least and hour in the backyard. The sun was hot because this is in Texas but juan reluctanly sat in a lounge chair outside. His mother still served him the same food and he was still carried in and out of the house. Accasionally he would waddle to the bathroom. Juans fat seeped through the arms of the lounge chair until one day he sat down and *crack* the arms collapsed along with the chair because the arms were also the front support legs. Juans cousins came out and lifted him and into the house to the couch. His mother baked him a cake, brownies, and some ice cream because she felt sorry for him. The next day, Juans father bought Juan a New Stainless steel armless lawnchair. one day juan was home alone out in his chair soaking up rays with a large pizza two 2 liter cokes , chinese food, and a chocolate cake when a bunch of the next door neighbor and his friends heard juan make a loud burp from there back yard. They peaked through the fence and saw shirtless juan stuffing his fat stomach with high calorie foods. The Kids found this both amusing and disgusting. They hopped the fence and yelled "hey fattie, dont u think uve had enough?" then laughed. juan said "get out of my yard!" the kids said " make me, catch me, i dare u ! c'mon u fat hippo! get ur fat @$$ up and do sumthin" "get out or ill call the police!", said juan. " lets see it tubby" said one of the kids smacking jans fat belly causing it to jiggle crazily." woah" said one of the kids in amazment. " watch this" he smacked it agin watching it jiggle. Juan tried stopping them but his arms were too flabby and had no muscle. the kids grabbed his fat rolls to watch them jiggle too" this dude has bigger boobs than my mom!" said one of the kids while slapping one of juans manboobs. Then they heard a car pull up and scaled the fence and ran off. When juan told his parents they decided to keep him inside more often. Over the years Juan grew fatter and fatter and soon just sat on his couch in his underwear eating. By what would have been his enior year Juan had a belly the size of a beach ball and C cup man boobs. he was so fat would get up only to go to the bathroom. The next time he went to the doctor he weighed a massive 388 lbs. He loved sitting and eating all day. and he lived happily ever after.

THE END.

Omniscient
24th May 2006, 08:46 PM
People should really be more creative with the names of their stories.
Awesome this story was not, it was ok.
And check you spelling before you post it, you made some really unecessary mistakes, don't rush it!

Anyway, it was good, nice to read. And if you try harder, I know you can do it better!;)

FatMike
25th May 2006, 09:42 AM
Can you please paragraph your stories next time? Its hard to read as one block of writing. Good Start out however... :)

dissasterpiece
22nd July 2006, 12:22 AM
nice story man

knowiemanon
22nd July 2006, 05:52 AM
really good story

blorb
27th July 2006, 05:53 AM
Have to agree with Boochan, and spellcheck is your friend.

Matuso
31st July 2006, 04:52 AM
WALL OF TEXT

lol

WTFOMGwolfgang
2nd August 2006, 04:41 PM
Paragraph it, first off. Each different idea throughout the story should have it's own paragraph. Like have the first paragraph as the one that tells about Juan and his family and his weight and how he gets teased, then the second paragraph is him eating, etc.

Secondly, I saw a lot of run-on sentences and fragments. You might want to work on that.

minigut
3rd August 2006, 02:47 AM
Good story

gutbear
30th August 2006, 01:51 PM
its good to see people trying and posting

slowboy
30th August 2006, 08:53 PM
man.. i wish i had a mom like his

gainer93
22nd October 2006, 05:54 AM
it was a good story but, as said before, it as hard to read as a wall of text

valickai
23rd October 2006, 12:16 AM
Cool story. Let's see more next time!

bobbykandal
2nd November 2006, 02:41 PM
funny story, i wish i was that mexican dude! being stuffed all day with no school would be awesome!

mega
18th November 2006, 08:27 AM
sort of a sad ending
i can only imagine they had to crane him out of there
or let him die
:(