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bigbellywis
31st March 2006, 03:00 AM
Weight Gain
By BigBellyWIS

There were two twins, one was named Tim, a very slim 145 pounds and a track star. The other twin named Tom was a very fat 450 pounds and was a coach for people who wanted to gain fat. The strange part is that they were spliten up at birth. Tim went to a very phyiscal family. While Tom went to a family where the mom was a feeder and the dad(which is 650 pounds) was the feedee. They never seen each other until that fateful day.
When it was Tim and Tom's 21st birthday, Tim's wife, Tonya and Tom's feeder/girlfriend, Idis was taking Tim and Tom to Chubbies(They still don't know about each other). When Tim and Tonya got to chubbies, they got the best seat in the house and order a 9'' pizza to share. When Tom and Idis got to Chubbies, they had to sit at the back of the building and they order 10 9'' burgers, all for Tom.
After Tim and Tonya finished eating, Tim went to warm up the car. After Tom and Idis finished eating, Idis went to warm up the car, because Tom could not get up yet. When Tom and Tonya got up, they bump into each other. They both said,''Escuse me." Then Tonya said,''Wait a minute, tim is that you?!" Tom said,''No, I'm Tom." Then Tonya said,''Oh, carry on." When they both got into there own car, Idis and Tim backed out and step on the gas. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERHHHHHHKJDS;LFHSDDSLGLGS;LGHS;L J
They both crashed into each other. When Idis and Tim came out of the car and check the damage, Idis said," Tom is that you!?'' and Tim said," No, it's Tim." Then Idis yelled," Tom get out here now." When Tom got out and seen Tim and Tim looked at Tom, they both fainted. Tonya came out of the car and yelled,''TIM!'' When the ambulance got to the hospital with Tim and Tom. They were both placed in the same room.
Both Tim and Tom got up at the same time and they just screamed at the top of there lungs. When Tim and Tom stopped yelling, Tim asked,'' Where you were born?''. Tom said,''Feeluponu, South Carolina." and Tim said,''Me too." Tim Paused and said,"How old are you?'' and Tom said,"December 11,1984." and Tim said," OH my gosh we are twins, we look the same, we were born on the same date, their is no other explantion." and Tom said," my gosh, your right." When Idis and Tonya came in to there, Tim and Tom both said,''we're both twins." Then Tonya and Idis said,"WOW and you just notice."



To be continued

Omniscient
31st March 2006, 05:58 AM
Well........it's better than the last one...
I feel this one was also a bit rushed...and confusing sometimes

But keep it up! You're getting better

bigbellywis
31st March 2006, 01:03 PM
Thank you for the advice

WTFOMGwolfgang
31st March 2006, 07:52 PM
Wow. I got through the 1st paragraph and then I got lost.

I don't mean to insult you, but you should practice your writing. I'm no expert by far, but I do decently.

Things that helped me were journal-writing and text-based MMORPGs.

bigbellywis
31st March 2006, 07:59 PM
i know but im only a math person im ok at english is just writing a book is hard or stuff like that

Omniscient
31st March 2006, 09:26 PM
Then why do u write stories when you say yourself you're not good at it...

bigbellywis
31st March 2006, 11:34 PM
so i can get better

Matuso
31st March 2006, 11:53 PM
I don't mean to insult, but you have you taken any English classes, at all? Because apparently you're from Wisconsin...is English not your first language?

That's always bugged me. :l

Omniscient
1st April 2006, 01:56 PM
i know but im only a math person im ok at english is just writing a book is hard or stuff like that

Personally, I feel language and grammar is more important than math. Sure math is important too, but not as important as language
Like for example, when you go shopping how much is "56X+4,5X(2X)-(6X+6)=4X(-5)" going to help you compared actually know the language and how to talk.

Matuso
2nd April 2006, 12:39 AM
I itch...I have a craving...an itchy craving...to solve that maths equation...does anyone have any Calaminepisquared lotion?

FatMike
2nd April 2006, 04:25 AM
Too Late Matuso... I just got my Graphics Calculator out

x = 0.08188296045 (Rounded down to 2dp.. 0.08) :P

Matuso
2nd April 2006, 07:43 PM
I got 0.08.

:3

And I did it by HAND. HA.

x3

pavili255
3rd April 2006, 03:54 AM
...I just got my Graphics Calculator out...

LOL, sorry... I don't mean to be rude or anything, but that's kinda funny. Can you play advanced games on that calculator? ;)

Graphing calculator...