The Worship

[goodgainer]

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The stupid computer had never worked right. But Johnathan did not want to wait to tell his friends online about his new pounds.
"418, 418... gotta remember!" He thought to himself, as to not forget. Johnathan was 17, and was about 5"8, and one thing that wasn't so normal was that he had a huge, massive, hanging stomach. He had never been skinny, but in the past few years he just suddenly didn't care. He had found out a lot of guys liked gaining weight, and it wasnt just him.
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"Ugh, you stupid computer!" John thought. He kicked the box of a machine in his frustration. His belly shook and wiggled from the movement of his rather thick leg. He felt his little man come popping out. John quickly wished him away, and as he wished, he went back in his hole.
"Gah, I love my stomach, but... If that keeps happening..."
He felt at his belly a little, with his hand backwards, as if someone else was doing it. He kneaded and proded, and the little man popped out with full avengance. He then realized that his image had uploaded. He looked at the computer and started clicking away. Then his mom came in.
"Honey, why don't you go to the mall or something? You need to work off that weight you've been finding lately." John groaned. But then he thought of the food court. His favorite kind of court.
"Alright, mom. Let me get some clothes on. "
"Allright, honey."
And so he heaved himself up. At his tallest, his belly hung at least seven inches from the beltline. He had a developed third chin, which he though made his second one look even bigger. He looked at himself in the mirror to look at his wonderful body. He then proceeded to put on his 6XL t-shirt and his 4XL basketball shorts. He wasn't one with much money, so he bought what would fit for a while.
He then proceeded to move his blobby self down the stairs of his small house he shared with his mother, with the stairs grumbling about his weight. He took his car keys and waddled out the door. His mother smiled at his determination.
"Ah, poor boy. I wish he wasn't so fat, or I wouldn't have to make him go out when the family visits."
Outside, John pushed his sttering wheel up, hefted himself in, and spread his legs out to push the gut through, hen pushed them closer together, and pulled the wheel down again. With a few turns, the car rumbled to life. He backed up, and started toward the shopping mall in the city.
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At the mall, he looked at the Casual male XL shop, and went inside. He found a few things marked down that his bloated self could afford. He payed and proceeded to the food court. He then ordered his food and sat down on a strong bench he always sat at. He started to eat, when a guy his age came over and sat down across from him.
"Hello."
"Um, hi. Do I know you?"
"Perhaps." This guy sure had nerve, John thought. He looked over to glare, and saw he was blushing at him, off in space. John waved his hand back and forth, seeing ehare his mind was.
"Hello? Ya there, stranger?"
"...huh? Oh, yeah, just starin'."
"staring at what?"
"Your immensely huge gut."
That was it. John did not need random people coming and critisizing him/
"F*ck you, man."
"No, no! I didn't mean it that way!"
"Then how DID you mean it?"
"... umm...."

To Be continued...(Sorry!)

[Barnabas Collins]

Not a bad beginning. I do feel sorry for Jonathan because his mother sends him away when the family visits. Does the family hate fat people? She does not seem ashamed of Jonathan, just wanting him thinner, if you know what I mean.

I cannot wait to see how this develops. There's this mysterious other guy all of the sudden, probably an admirer. Also, didn't he leave his fat image up at home for the visiting family to see?

[goodgainer]

I see. Thanks for the commens, I actually see the plot holes I left open. So I'll try to attend to those. And I'll try to add to it.

[WTFOMGwolfgang]

I love the way it's written. Keep up the good work.

[goodgainer]

I love the way it's written. Keep up the good work.

Thank you, and I'll Try to keep the consistency. I always have problems with that.

[goodgainer]

"...You see, man... I like round guys...and..." He stammered.
John took a moment to take a look at his face. It was one of the jocks at his school. He had golden locks, was very muscle-toned, and all of the girls called him a 'lion'. John always said he looked like the sasquatch. So, why was 'lion'-boy saying he liked his round pillow of a gut?
"Wait. I know you! Well, actually, I've seen you, but you know what I mean..." John said.
"Well, I can't tell people I like fat guys, can I?"
"You do realize that people are staring at the sasquatch?" John said dryly. He then proceeded to finish his meal. Lion-boy looked around, wondering who the 'sasquatch' was. When he realized it was him, he replied a bit too late.
"Dude, Im not that hairy!"
"Well, perhaps not, but not many guys started shaving large patches of their face at age 12." John said through bites.
"Dude. The Lion does not get insulted without punishment." He started his fist at John's stomach. John did not wince, but became shocked when he started to rub his stomach.
"What the f*ck are you doing?"
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At Johns' house, his mother was talking with his relatives as they stood at the door.
"Goodbye now! See you later!"
As the relatives drove off, she cleaned off her kitchen table. After a while, she wondered what John did on his computer all day. So she cloppedinto his room. She looked in his documents. She saw an image file named '418'. She clicked on it to see a photo of her son's stomach.
"WHAT THE F*CK IS THIS?" She screeched. She started to delete his images of his progress mercilously, file after file. '405', '375', and finally to '367', his first gaining image.
"I see what he's doing. Gaining weight on purpose to ruin my reputation as a office giant, is he..." she went downstairs and poured herself a glass of wine. She then decided to forget wine and fetched one of her husbands beers and guzzled it. She was confused, scared about her son's habits.
"... I believe ah shall talk to him 'bout this..." She said to herself, wine and three beers later.

To Be Continued...(Sorry!)

[gryboy09]

really really good i hope u continue you have a talent

[Matuso]

This has potential. I hope the jock beats the crap out of the mother and everyone learns a lesson.

[fat man mikey]

well written...and an overall good story.Good job!im a writer as well and 1 day i hope 2 b as good as u!

[FatMike]

Great Storyline, very original.
Hope to see more from you in the future.

[goodgainer]

Thanks for the comments!:)

[doughyboy]

great start, u have a talent for this. :D

[goodgainer]

"I like you. Come meet me at the address on the paper I just smushed in your stomach." The Lion-boy said.
"...umm--" John started, but hecould not finish as his other popular friends were ushering him to Abercrombie. John heaved himself up, and bent down to get the paper. Inside it, it said:

Dominike
33442 Evermore Lane
Meet me there, fat boy! ^.~

John blushed. Maybe it was just his gut instinct, but he felt he had to set him strait: he wasn't gay. So he waddled into Abercrombie. The store obviously wasn't targeted to the larger people; the doors said it all. John had to move sideways through the door to get inside, only to crash into the closely placed sales rack.
John saw the smallness of even their largest size and laughed out loud. People started to stare at him. He stopped laughing and proceeded to waddle to the lion-boy. Hiding in the shadows didn't work in the store designed for anorexic people. He ran (read: tried to) to Dominike and bowed him over into another rack.

John growled "I am NOT gay, you insanely freakish sasquatch. Now get out of my way."
Dominike's eyes glazed over; he didn't want to face the truth. He moved out of the way.
"Let's go, girls." He said, depressed. The girls were delighted to have his arm around them.
John smashed into the sales rack, leaving some Abercrombie shirts displayed in their little black blinds.
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When John came home an hour later, he didn't expect what came.
"Well, my fat b*tch of a son, sit down next to me. Let us have a small little chat." She hissed.
"Umm, hello, mother dear--" John was blocked off at a flying beer bottle, which nearly hit his gut.

"I know your secret... You... You..." His mother broke down into sobs.
"Mom, are you okay?" John rushed the best he could over to his mother, who was kneeling in broken glass.
"I didn't know you were gaining weight on purpose, my little joy of mine, wanting to be fat. Why? Wasn't I a good mother?"
"Mom..."
"Well?"
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Dominike's sport car's engine became silent. He went inside his home, which had three floors. He ran to his room, inorder to hide his tears.
"I actually liked him. I really did. I admired from afar, and got rejected." His tears were flowing more than a Buff muscle guy's should be able to. His sister came into his room.
"What is it, bro?"
"..." He had nothing to say. He sniffled and cried into hs little sister's ample chest.
"He rejected me."
"I see. Then THIS is what you will do." She patted her brothers head and proceeded to whisper to him.

To Be Continued...

[goodgainer]

That was the end of Belly (chapter) one, just so you know. I might put it in as a complete version when this story is complete.

[Barnabas Collins]

Oh this is so interesting. I cannot wait to see what John's mother does and Dominique's sister... I wonder if she is going to help her brother get over John or plot something evil to do to John. I guess we shall find the answer soon enough.

You are doing such a good job with this, goodgainer. There are not too many characters yet, but they each have a good bit of mystery about them and then they all have their backgrounds. Not a bad presentation of it either.

[Omniscient]

It hasn't striked me as good yet but it has real potential. I would like to see how it develops.

[goodgainer]

Oh this is so interesting. I cannot wait to see what John's mother does and Dominique's sister... I wonder if she is going to help her brother get over John or plot something evil to do to John. I guess we shall find the answer soon enough.

You are doing such a good job with this, goodgainer. There are not too many characters yet, but they each have a good bit of mystery about them and then they all have their backgrounds. Not a bad presentation of it either.

Yeah, I love to keep the backgrounds and such secret until a climax, then I leak it all out for a better affect. So, You'll hear it soon enough. ;) And Dominike is his name, not Dominique, just to point out...;) And I will introduce at least two new characters in the next installment. Most gainer stories are just about the gaining, not about the feelings and actions around it, so I decided to try and do my own thing to it.

[goodgainer]

"Then here. You play tricks on him. You mess with his mind. Make him blubber. You make his school life so miserable, in fact, that he looks to you for help."
"But... he rejected me..."
"Well, did you hear? That was my advice to you!!!" She growled at him.
"Thanks, sis."
"You're welcome, my elder -homo- brother."
"Hey! Shut up!"
His sister trotted back to her room, full of herself, to see her father sitting on her bed.
"Come here, Vika."
"What, dad?"
"Why are you helping my son be a gay man and find a boyfriend?"
"Well, you see, dad... He likes rounder men, and he is hopelessly in love. If he doesn't get out of it, how will he fall in love with a girl?" She lied.
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"You little sh*t, you had better tell me everything." John's mother said through grated teeth.
"Well, mom..." he stammered. He had no clue what to do.
"You are gaining weight on purpose. I have a right to know why you are doing it."
"I like it... it feels good. I like touching it, feeling it." He blurted, and shut up before he spilled anything else.
"What next, you gonna tell me you're gay?" His mother had calmed down, but was befuddled.
"No, mom. I just like it when people pat it and told me that I'm getting fat." He blurted some more.
"Whew, so you're not gay." His mom sighed, relieved.
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At school, John found nothing but trouble. His shirt had gotten ripped, and his gym shirt hadn't fit for a long time. His backpack had gotten stolen, and his homework ripped. He wondered what was going on, who was messing with him.
"Why is this all happening to me?" He shouted in the courtyard in the middle of school. He had to change into his gym shirt, two sizes too tight. He got a zero for the day in math because he didn't have his homework.
"Hello, fatboy. You're guts hanging, by the way." A depressed Dominike whispered to him. He patted John's stomach, and ran off.
"What... the... F*UCK!?"John yelled. He was tired and left classes early; he went home and fell asleep.
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Dominike was on a high. He patted John's stomach.
"Allright, class. Today is seat change." The teacher said. "Choose a seat for John, too, Dominike."
"Allright." Dominike pulled out a seat next to the window in the back, and 'John' chose a seat next to him.
"This is turning into the perfect day." he thought to himself.

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"Come here, Vika."
"What, dad?"
"Why are you helping my son be a gay man and find a boyfriend?"

The prose style of this story is just surreal. Is it a kind of parody?

[Wish Fulfillment]

I like it. It's quite nice to see a story that's got more to it then just the gaining part.

[goodgainer]

thanks! :) I tried my best.

[goodgainer]

Little character excersize I did that was really cool:

Dominke rubbed John's belly, much to his surprise. Dominike kept jiggling and squishing it, makind John blush.
"Ya like that, lard?"
"Stop it, Lion-boy."
Dominke saw Johns red face and imitated it perfectly. He hugged John closely, and said:
"Don't do that. It makes me feel... down there." he said.
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Yes, but this may or may not tell the future of the story. Remember, Johns not gay? ~.- I wrote this before I decided he wasn't.

[peteyboy]

Great story all around. Very well written.

[RHCP943]

yeah, I wish more would be posted. it's a great story thus far

[GreenGlasses101]

this is a really good story, the characters have very strong personalities
and it is hilarious! i couldnt stop laughing

[doughboy]

...Continue!

[blahblahgg]

Yeahh that was cool. Really descriptive and realistic. Good job!

[schleppster01]

GoodGainer:

You have started with a nicely unusual premise. Keep going!

[iLikeBig]

I like what I've read so far; are you going to do another installment?

[bigbelly94]

dude u should keep going with this it's pretty interesting.

[Bigbelly13]

Great story, very interesting, please continue